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Hi Corey!!! :D You really have potential. This piece is very good. I only found a couple of things. At the beginning of the passage, your writing is a bit ...

This is only a short story I made for my math class. It was for the plot diagram. I just wanted to put it up on YWS for people to ...

hi colleen :D nice to meet you! I really liked this story. :) It made me gooey eyed during the entire time I was reading it. There were only a ...

Hi :D I only wanted to say a few things about your story. It is really interesting, but there are a lot of errors. First, the spelling of some words ...

Please review and rate! I want it to turn out great, so I appreciate all types of critiques...even if you're extremely mean...it's okay! This is only an introducing page...I plan ...

Truly, i think this story is better than the other one you made. It's a lot more original, and i think it started off so much better than Twilight. That's ...

that's very suspenseful, even if it had already happened. :) I liked the prologue, it makes me wonder what happened and it's also very agitating not knowing. :? i hope ...

Your writing is truly amazing! :!: It's very nice and the story is good. It does remind me of twilight, though. :? You're very creative, so i know you can ...